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PostPosted: Nov 24, 2009 12:36 pm    Post subject: Basil Reply with quote

ce parere aveti despre poza asta ?


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PostPosted: Nov 24, 2009 12:41 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

nu buna.

1. nu inteleg titlul
2. nu citesc povestea
3. nu regasesc atmosfera
4. unde e focusul ?
5. unde e compozitia ?
6. unde e spilu ?

toate bune si spor.
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PostPosted: Nov 24, 2009 12:51 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

titlul e simplu: busuioc, povestea e ca busuiocul e in crestere, atmosfera zic eu ca e una placuta, focusul ii undeva sub unele frunze Wink cam atat.
iti multumesc de comenturi
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PostPosted: Nov 24, 2009 12:59 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

remo wrote:
focusul ii undeva sub unele frunze

Laughing Ai dreptate

Eu zic sa o refaci de la inceput. Ai mare grija la fundal. Greseala comuna la foto cu flori: prinzi din ghiveci, si nu are rost.
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PostPosted: Nov 24, 2009 1:04 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

horhhe wrote:
nu buna.

1. nu inteleg titlul
2. nu citesc povestea
3. nu regasesc atmosfera
4. unde e focusul ?
5. unde e compozitia ?
6. unde e spilu ?

toate bune si spor.


1. cred ca basil vine de la busuioc, da' in forma actuala "foaie verde si-un chistoc / nu vedem ca-i busuioc...
2. cred ca-i scrisa in "braille", tre'sa-ti bagi dejtele-n ochi s-o dibui;
3. e normal, poza-i trasa-n vid;
4. pretutindeni si nicaieri, unde-ai auzit tu de propagarea focusului in vid, George?
5. in mod clar in compozitie toata aroma e data de busuiocul proaspat folosit...
6. spilu' e ca tre sa revigoram economia nationala printr-o agricultura intesiva. pana si cei care stau la bloc trebuie sa (se) cultive, chiar si in ghivece.

Sper ca autorul sa fie foarte deranjat de gluma, e facuta pe un ton amical. Arareori George comenteaza atat de detaliat astfel de imagini.
remo, primul pas pe care-l ai de facut inainte de toate e sa-ti revizuiesti putin cate putin cultura fotografica, si ma refer la cea vizuala.
www.1x.com e un inceput bun .
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PostPosted: Nov 24, 2009 1:27 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

remo wrote:
titlul e simplu: busuioc, povestea e ca busuiocul e in crestere, atmosfera zic eu ca e una placuta, focusul ii undeva sub unele frunze Wink cam atat.
iti multumesc de comenturi


Nu cred ca ai prins ideea... Vezi pe aici una-alta:

http://www.foto-magazin.ro/tutorial_open.php?art=ftm20/archives/2009/01/fotocompozitia_2.html

http://www.foto-magazin.ro/tutorial_open.php?art=ftm20/archives/2008/10/fotocompozitie.html

http://www.foto-magazin.ro/forum/viewtopic.php?t=8418

Imaginea e extrem de banala. Oricine, oricand poate face mii la fel. Posibil sa existe mult entuziasm pentru un aparat foto nou, si o imagine cu un DOF mic, insa pentru o imagine buna este nevoie de mult mai mult de atat.

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PostPosted: Nov 24, 2009 1:38 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

man..ai vrut pareri. nu tre sa te superi. Smile
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PostPosted: Nov 24, 2009 1:57 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

dar nu ma supar, citesc parerile voastre.
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PostPosted: Nov 24, 2009 4:42 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

remo wrote:
dar nu ma supar, citesc parerile voastre.


OT: ai mai incercat sa-l cresti in ghiveci? si daca da, cat de mare ai reusit sa-l cresti?

PS: incearca ceva pe macro cu diferite faze de crestere.

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PostPosted: Nov 24, 2009 5:21 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

cam la asa ceva m-am gandit, dar acum stagneaza de ceva vreme, o sa mai incerc si am sa iau in considerare sfaturile voastre
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PostPosted: Nov 25, 2009 9:29 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Am refacut dintr-o alta perspectiva cu un alt background, si ceva setari diferite.




Frunza verde busuioc
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PostPosted: Nov 25, 2009 10:19 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Deja se vede un mic progres! felicitari! Drumul e lung si plin de nereusite. Important este sa nu te descurajezi Wink
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PostPosted: Nov 25, 2009 10:24 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Remo, in general, cand faci macro sau proxifotografie trebuie / este bine sa ai un subiect unic.
Danye are niste exemple elocvente; cauta in forum dupa user "Danye".
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